Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, November 14, 2019
Rehau marae.
It was really fun. We sung 3 songs.
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Hi amber the names Diya
ReplyDeleteI really like your how the writing just appers
maybe next time add more color
check my blog https://pcsdiyar.blogspot.com
Diya
Ok thanks for telling me what I could do better
ReplyDeleteNice
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