My buddy class is rm 3 i am buddy's name is jessica and lucy. We have written this story and we have published it to make it better. We added in a picture of us.
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Wednesday, August 7, 2019
Writing with my buddy jessica and lucy.
My buddy class is rm 3 i am buddy's name is jessica and lucy. We have written this story and we have published it to make it better. We added in a picture of us.
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Hi Amber l really liked how you made the background colourful and the letters.l also really like the colour purple.Next time you might want to make the words a bit bigger l can't really see them.How come you have a little buddy and big buddy
ReplyDeleteBecause lucy does not have a buddy. we did not have the words purple but jess wanted them purple thats why. We made the words as big as we could but we had to insert a pic or we would make the enormous like not to enormous.
ReplyDeletehi amber its deziah i like your blog post because the photo is cute and i like how you wrote what each other looked like
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