Attribute organizer

Kia ora,

I made this attribute organizer in my class. What we had to do is choose some olympians and write facts about them.

What I think I did well was including a good amount of facts and enough information. What I need to work on is including more colour. Please leave any feedback in the comments

Olympics tokyo 2020

 This is my poster I created for Tokyo 2020 Olympics, the reason I created it is because we have a literacy theme every 2-3 weeks.

I think i did well in a way because i included the logo, I also included some of the sports and when it started. I need to work on the background because its a bit plain. I couldn't change the background though because otherwise you could see the background of the images. If there is any feedback then please comment.

Space

 Kia ora,

This is my Fact file I created by google slides.

This task was fun but hard because I had to include the photos and I chose to include 5-10 facts for each planet. I think I did well with including more then 5 facts and good photos, although I did well with the facts I think I could still write more next time. I personally think next time ill do more work on it but please let me know what you think in the comments. If there is any feedback please let me know:)

Thank you

Writing task 2

 Here is my other writing task but this one is on Venus.

I think I have done well with the facts again but I think i need to work on the explaining and how more of it works.

Any feedback then comment please

Writing task

 This is my writing task I created for my literacy

We had to create a theme I chose space as my theme, for the writing task I wrote facts about it. I think I did well with writing the facts and including lots of information. I need to include more pictures next time. If there is any feedback please comment.

Maori calendar

 This is the calendar I have created, it is a slide about the seasons and what happens through out the seasons, here is my one.I did well with writing my seasons and what month there in, I personally need to work on being more descriptive about what happens during the season. Please comment any suggestions in the comments

Star cluster

 Here is what the star cluster is called in different activities.

How you do this is read a article and type down what they call it.

Here is a photo of it

I think I did well with the spelling. The thing I think I have to work on is decoration 

Please comment any ideas or feedback