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Friday, May 28, 2021

My seven fish story retold

 Today in literacy i decided to do a task where you basically have to recreate a story called the seven fish. I chose to do this because it seemed fun and easy. Here is mine I dont like it but yeah

I think I did well with the pictures. I need to include more of the story next time though.
If there is anything you agree or think i should work on please comment

Jacinda Arden letter

We are doing a theme of matariki.

We get a theme every 3 weeks and have to complete tasks to get stars, there is 2 compulsory tasks that we must complete. I chose the matariki letter to Jacinda Ardern to try persuade her to make matariki a public holiday, it was a compulsory task. Here is my letter, 

I think I did well with explaining why i think it would be a good idea. I think I need to work on more words that describe it better, and maybe explain different ideas. If there is anything you think i could change please comment. 

Wednesday, May 12, 2021

My circus poster

 Circus poster

Here is my circus poster I created while doing literacy.

This is the poster altogether, I included links that went to the animal. We had to include the animal and what its talent is. I just chose random animals 3 of them are circus animals ive seen, the camel I haven't see. The elephant is on there I didn't include a link for that.














I think what I did good was I found some pictures that showed them doing the talent, but I think that I need to include more information about there talent.

Please write something you think I need to work on in the comments.


Thursday, May 6, 2021

Marbled cone snail

 The marble cone snail

Here is my marble cone snail, I did this as a task for my literacy. Pretty much we had to complete a poster about the marble cone snail, and include why it is dangerous and a picture of it. 


I think i did well with how the layout of the poster is, the thing I need to work on is including more color maybe and more about it.
If there is any feedback please write it in the comments.

Wednesday, May 5, 2021

attribute organiser

 Attribute Organizer


This is a attribute organizer that i did.

It was worth 3 stars, i did it at literacy as a task. What you had to do is put a picture in and put a few facts in the boxes.

 

I think i did good because i finished it and i included as much facts as i could.